Is Winning Everything


 

I enjoyed reading your Winning is Everything essays. I see lots of growth since our first attempts at persuasive writing.

 

I've listed some common errors which I noted as I read over the writing samples. Use this list to not only edit and revise your Winning essay, but to also improve future writing assignments.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

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