Angeline's Difficult Choice
One day Angeline was walking home from school when she saw a group of her friends. Her mom wasn't home, and she had told Angeline to go home do her homework, and if her mom still wasn't home she could watch T.V. She really wanted to go with her friends, but her mom had told her to go straight home. It was a difficult choice to make. She went over to her friends.
"Hey girls. What's up?" said Angeline as she walked over.
"Hey Angie," said her friend Sara. "We were just about to go to the mall. Want to come?"
"Ummmm," said Angeline
"Come on it'll be fun," said Emma.
"Okay I'll come," said Angeline.
After Angeline and her friends were done at the mall, Angeline had spent all her emergency money from her mom. It was 9 o'clock at night. Tomorrow they had school. Angeline's mom was very worried. She was about to call the police when someone walked through the door.
"Angeline Marie Witherspoon!" yelled her mother.
"What's wrong mom?" Angeline had forgotten about her mom, homework, and had no clue what time it was.
"You tell me! You were suppose to be here when I got home!" Her mom was very upset.
Angeline remembered. She was suppose to have done her homework and stuff, but instead she disobeyed her mom.
"I went to the mall with my friends and I'm really sorry I completely lost track of time please forgive me." Angeline said all in one breath.
"I'm very disappointed in you, but right now you better go to bed." her mom answered.
Angeline went to the stairs.
"Goodnight" she said so soft like she was talking to herself.
She couldn't fall asleep. The difficult choice she had made was the wrong choice, too.
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Comments (2)
5609SN said
at 1:44 pm on Sep 30, 2011
I think the plot of this story is entertaining. You had some errors. Reread it and see if you can figure out where. Maybe you should have used a few more paragraphs to stretch the story out a little bit, but, other than that I liked your story.
5613KU said
at 1:48 pm on Sep 30, 2011
It was an exciting story to read, but the title was not creative.
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