Crying Midgets
By Chase
My number one pet peeve is when babies cry forever and they don’t stop. Have you ever been to a restaurant when there's a baby that cries so loud and it really bugs you? If you're in a restaurant and you're there for two hours and there's a baby crying so loud for the whole time, it feels like you've been there for 10 hours! I have a lot of pet peeves but this tops the list. I wonder if the babies even know if they're bothering me? I hope you understand how annoying babies can be when they cry. I wonder if the baby’s trying to say, “Mommy, change my diaper!"
Once I was at a restaurant and I was there for two hours and there was this baby crying. I first thought it was hungry but then it started crying forever. I was there for an hour so far and the baby was crying the whole time.
Then I went up to the mom to ask her if she can make the baby stop crying, but she said, “I can’t help it if my baby won’t stop crying.” One hour later I left and I was relieved but I could still hear the sounds in my head.
If a baby starts crying it could be very annoying. But if it starts its probably not going to stop for a long time. The baby probably wants a new diaper or dinner or its thirsty. The thing could change if you know what they're saying.
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Comments (5)
1201NB said
at 12:38 pm on Feb 29, 2012
Work on it more then tell so I can comment the final draft.
1204MN said
at 12:40 pm on Feb 29, 2012
don' ask questions you should answer
1203BM said
at 12:46 pm on Feb 29, 2012
Work on it more
7818CR said
at 4:18 pm on Feb 29, 2012
Make it longer too. Don't ask so many questions either.
7802KB said
at 4:21 pm on Feb 29, 2012
I like yous so far. You need dialogue
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