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1202CML Norman Rockwell Story

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                             THE DIVING BOARD!!!!!

 

 

Hi my name is Jack and I loved to swim until the accident. It all started on a Saturday morning I was watching TV in my house with my friends, when a commercial came up about a new 20ft diving board out at the pool today. My friend Mike asked do you guys want to go, and everyone said yes. We all started running towards the pool when we ran into a line to get to the diving board. The sign said you have an hour wait we all growned. Then Mike came up with and idea to cut the line he said we should climb the back fences and sneak into the line. Ryan said but there is a dog guarding the fence. We all decided lets do it, we went around back with a ton of ham. Once we saw the dog we through it really far away.

     There came our chance we climbed the fence and started sneaking around to get to the line. We started sneaking around once we saw the people Tom decided we should throw big rocks at the fence that might get everyones attention. We all started throwing rocks at the fence and then we cut in line. I went first, while I was climbing my friends decided to push me if I was going to be to scared. When I got to the top I got so frightened that I started to crouch down. Then out of nowhere my friend Tom pushed me in. I did a bellyflop so hard that I had a huge hideous rash. When we got home the doctor said I had to stay on the couch the whole week and that was paradise.

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Keith Schoch said

at 12:34 pm on Dec 8, 2011

Quotation marks for dialogue? More paragraphing? You also have a lot of run-on sentences.

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